Millie, Molly and Mary Barbara Pyett © 2014
( At present, I’ve not kept the rhythm ordered. This text is before a visit to an editor, shall see how it evolves after the visit.)
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Millie, Molly and Mary, are three chooks who live at a dairy.
They cluck for some corn, as cows moo with a yawn.
Cats meow in the sun, as dogs bark for fun.
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One night, they roost, sound asleep on the Ute,
expecting to be there ‘till morning.
That night Farmer Brown drives into the town.
To his great surprise, his mates soon advise
And point to the chooks on his fender.
No time for a bender, a change of agenda.
Amender, he drives home to Brenda.
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When the cock gives a crow, they belatedly know,
Their night ride can’t hide,
their feathers askew, it had to accrue
to dementia, or their own misadventure.
They hop off the Ute; Farmer Brown gives a hoot,
and concedes the chooks need a feed,
before milking his cows that are waiting by now.
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Next night as they sleep, a slinky fox creeps.
The dog makes a growl; the cat gives a yowl.
Farmer Brown wakes from sleep leaves his bed with a leap.
Scares the fox from the barn that runs far from the farm.
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Again next night, they huddle in fright.
Thunder and light make them want to take flight.
Drumming hail sees them pale as they shake on the bale.
Eggs scarce for a while, warrants no smile.
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The cows moo outside with no- where to hide.
Cats yowl in the house and hide with the mouse.
Dogs growl in the shed, wait to be fed.
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Peace reins on the farm, hens cluck in the barn,
Lay eggs, one, two and three for farmer Brown’s tea.
They cluck for some corn, as cows moo with a yawn.
Cats meow in the sun as dogs bark for fun.
No longer wary, they visit the dairy.
They’re no longer flappy, now they are happy.
Farmer Brown may appear with a smile ear to ear,
his grin doesn’t vary when he sees Millie, Molly and Mary.
‘Millie, Molly and Mary’ is a children’s farmyard story picture book for the young at heart. The play with language will both increase a child’s vocabulary as well as entertain the adult reading the story.
Terrific, Barbara, it has a wonderful rythym, even in the raw state! Love it. ❤
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And I’ve just been to your publisher and purchased two copies of Lily’s Wish, for grand-daughters in different households, the only ones fitting into the age bracket. 😀
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Thank you so much Christine! I do hope they like their books. How kind you are! ❤
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😀 😀
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There’s such a nice rhythm in your words! I’d love to see them with pictures. I too hope the editor will like your story.
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Sorry about the delay, but I only just realised there were ‘pink’ comments hidden away. Thank you so much for your kind words, and I hope so too! ❤
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Wonderful, Ba ! Can’t think of anything better, offhand, than coming up with something to help littlies learn !!
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Thank you M-R, it would be wonderful to get such stories published… one can hope! 🙂
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And we hope along with you !!!
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Thank you muchly! 🙂
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I love it!
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Thank you Martha, we shall see how the editor liked it, or not!
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